This one is very short. Mostly dialog. I am imagining a short video
The Voice
by
J. Smith Kirkland
The phone rings. It's Charlie checking
up to see how Jim is doing since the flood, and then the killer
hornets, and then the flu all turned his town into an unapproachable
island of disasters.
“They say the flood waters should
start receding sometime next week, if the rain holds off.”
“That's great, Charlie, maybe
everyone will have lived through the flu by then, but we still can't
go out without being attacked by hornets.”
The conversation is interrupted when an
urgent cry comes bellowing from the kitchen and over to Jim.
“The Turkey! It's going to burn!”
“It still has 30 more minutes. It's
fine.”
“Are your sure?”
“Yes, Raymond, I am sure. Anyway,
Charlie, have they said anything about the hornets?”
“Yeh, they were hoping if they got
all of the queens last week, that this worker bunch would just die
out from lack of coordination, but now they are not sure.”
Another interruption, “Are you going
to talk on the phone all night? You know you could be spending this
time writing or doing something productive.”
“Shut up, Ralph. I have plenty of
time to talk on the phone. I wrote all morning. Remember?”
“I’m Hungry!”
“Shut up, Bubba, You ate 20 minutes ago."
Charlie thought Jim was all alone at his place. Sounds like others from town are staying with him, and maybe wearing out their welcome.
“Shut up, Bubba, You ate 20 minutes ago."
Charlie thought Jim was all alone at his place. Sounds like others from town are staying with him, and maybe wearing out their welcome.
“Who are your talking to? Are there
other people staying in your house?”
“No, just the voices in my head.”
“You give them names?”
“Makes it easier to keep them
straight. I was just calling them Panic, Guilt, and Gluttony, but
Raymond, Ralph, and Bubba seemed more appropriate.”
The
Prompt
Restricted
and augmented lifestyles in the wake of the coronavirus pandemic may
have us writer-types writing more than ever–a silver lining.
But
have you stopped to consider how your protagonist(s) might respond to
a similar situation?
In
the midst of an emergency situation, whom would they seek to protect?
How would they behave if confined?
If
sharing close quarters with others, what might be said or done that
otherwise might not be, and what might be the repercussions?
How
might the situation bring out the best in them all–and the worst?
If
the exercise brings up interesting ideas, can you create an emergency
situation as a part of your story in order to bring your characters
to that place organically?
Story
A Day Framework
just
wrote.
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